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    dots Submission Name: It's Coming for Medots
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    Author: emochick13
    ASL Info:    16/female/Earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 22/26/15
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
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    dotsIt's Coming for Medots
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    Communication falls through the cracks in my mind
    There's nothing left for anyone to find
    Nothing left but me
    Left alone with my pain
    I feel it coming and try to flee
    But all attempts to save myself are in vain
    The Darkness comes for me, consumes my soul
    Breaks down my defense and swallows me whole.




    Submitted on 2007-12-20 11:59:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this it was short but had great flow good work i will be looking forwrd to reading more
    | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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