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    dots Submission Name: Song-like Depressiondots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 705
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1187



    Description:
       Quick, not very well put together piece.


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    dotsSong-like Depressiondots
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    (Spoken)
    Monotony.
    Just the one word can lead to millions.
    What is it that everyone finds monotonous?
    I'll tell you...

    Waking up everyday,
    just to find yourself back at the same place.
    Whether it be work, school, home, China.
    Less than everyone is lucky enough to wake up
    somewhere else...

    (Verse I)
    Close your eyes, yeah, close 'em.
    This is where the nightmare begins.
    Down the Rabbit's hole, lil' soldier men.
    Time escapes, escapes, do it again.

    Fall, fall, yeah fall
    Into this rewind life.
    Press play, baby-doll.
    Cut, oh cut, with your radio-knife.

    (Spoken)
    I fell asleep in your arms
    and woke up on the couch.
    Why is it I can't wake up
    still in your arms?

    Hunger drives me.
    Thirst drives me.
    Sexual satisfaction drives me.
    Biological timing drives me.

    Love only drives me if it's good enough.
    I'll search longer for lust than I will for love
    in my somewhere else.
    That's fucked.




    Submitted on 2007-12-20 15:37:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      "Press play, baby-doll.
    Cut, oh cut, with your radio-knife."

    I love that line I do I do I dooo.

    You know... I wonder why it is we are even allowed to feel this. Is it ever worth it?

    Very good for a quick piece, and there isn't much I'd actually change about it. Tell you what, if I decide to wake up and get horribly nit-picky, I'll help you out.

    But I likes it, soo...
    | Posted on 2007-12-22 00:00:00 | by Flynn | [ Reply to This ]


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