im glad you wrote that you had been drinking energy drinks for some time... the chaotic nature of the rhyming seems to empasize this. I can relate to this in a way, when ive had too much caffiene right before i try to sleep... though not quiet on the scale im assuming this was written after. but yeah, this make me remember all those nearly sleepless nights ive laid in bed, almost begging sleep to come...
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