for sean (pt. 2)
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for sean (pt. 2)
i wish i could tell you everything i hold inside me. that we could lie together on dark and lonely nights, and i could impart every hidden passion, secret desire, hidden motive to your unreadable face. i wish i could fall asleep beside you and wake up beside you and live beside you. i wish you would be proud enough to hold my hand as we walked down the street and laugh at my wit and sass. instead, you are two hundred miles away dating a seventeen year old who apparently makes you happy. and i live my life smiling, if not because i'm with you because the last time i saw you, you hugged me so close and whispered that you missed my laugh. i just wish you missed me enough to do something about it, i wish you missed me enough to love me. or loved me enough, to miss me. i die for you. i would, i could, i probably will. you ruin me. and i would rather be ruined by you than loved by anyone else. |
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| or wait; is it unreadable because of the dark? OK. gotcha. this is super good. | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ] | things get really rough after that "instead", eh? | this is so sweet and dark at the same time. i am wondering about the "unreadable face" line though. i guess i just can't wrap my mind around how unreadable is a good thing and if its not a good thing then why do you wish to fall asleep and wake up next to this person.? the lines; "i just wished you missed me enough to do something about it," sums it up doesn't it? powerful. the sincerity in these words really jumps out at the reader.(at least this reader). good stuff. i like. | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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