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for sean (pt. 2)

Author: freeradical
ASL Info:    22/feline/london
Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 311 /405 /63
Words: 194
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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for sean (pt. 2)

i wish i could tell you
everything i hold
inside me.

that we could lie together
on dark and lonely
and i could impart
every hidden passion,
secret desire,
hidden motive
to your unreadable face.

i wish i could fall asleep
beside you
and wake up
beside you
and live
beside you.

i wish
you would be proud enough
to hold my hand
as we walked down the street
and laugh at my wit
and sass.

you are two hundred miles away
dating a seventeen year old
who apparently
makes you happy.

and i live my life smiling,
if not because i'm with you
because the last time i saw you,
you hugged me so close
and whispered
that you missed my laugh.

i just wish you missed me enough
to do something about it,

i wish you missed me enough
to love me.

or loved me enough,
to miss me.

i die for you.
i would, i could,
i probably will.

you ruin me.

and i would rather be ruined
by you
than loved
by anyone else.

Submitted on 2007-12-20 23:43:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  or wait; is it unreadable because of the dark?
OK. gotcha.
this is super good.
| Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]
  things get really rough after that "instead", eh?
this is so sweet and dark at the same time.
i am wondering about the "unreadable face" line though. i guess i just can't wrap my mind around how unreadable is a good thing and if its not a good thing then why do you wish to fall asleep and wake up next to this person.?
the lines; "i just wished you missed me enough to do something about it," sums it up doesn't it?
the sincerity in these words really jumps out at the reader.(at least this reader).
good stuff. i like.
| Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by eno1 | [ Reply to This ]

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