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    dots Submission Name: What happened to the halosdots
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    Author: Tabris
    ASL Info:    17 male australia
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 7/6/6
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
    Total Views: 288
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    Bytes: 673



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    dotsWhat happened to the halosdots
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    The noose around my neck
    A reminder of my actions
    Something to remind me of what I was

    When I wake up
    All I see before me is barren and dark
    There's nothing left alive
    There's nothing worth protecting

    All the angels
    Their halos pulled around their necks
    Hanging from the trees

    And I stand
    On the edge of this vast
    And I can do nothing

    There is no purpose to my existence
    I am just another angel
    Dangling from a dead branch

    I wake up again
    And I find that I was sleeping
    With a noose around my neck




    Submitted on 2007-12-21 06:51:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wow! you did such a good job writing this! it's very well written. i love the idea that you wrote.
    | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]
      very innovative...the whole thing is very imaginative and very nicely put together...keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by N0shin | [ Reply to This ]
      All the angels
    Their halos pulled around their necks
    Hanging from the trees

    Is really descrpitive.. the entire thing paints pictures of desturction and the idea of all hope being lost.. It is such a time when the world meets such a fate. Good write and very descriptive...
    | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]



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