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    dots Submission Name: rantings of an insane woman dots
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    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 370
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 704
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    Bytes: 1763



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       just thought about it and wrote it


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    dotsrantings of an insane woman dots
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    in ones opinion who can determine love i mean its just an emotion that has been planted in our heads by everything we see must we need someone yes but how can we say i love you your heart doesnt love its a muscle your mind cant love it only thinks its in love i know we understand love but can we actually love we are always looking for it but when will we ever in depth love? i mean are we owned by this yes we are we are owned by everything we see and do money the government society everything we are never free we cant be we need to be owned by something weather it be love or money we can never be free regardless on what wars we fight to be free we are never free and it is the job of everything we see and do to own us we were not even born free once we are born we need a name that name owns us forever we need everything and everyone and what we need is love but again dose it really exist if we only made it up and schools warp it into us to be "smart" but we don't need half of what they teach us we were born smart and society as a hole has recked it they teach us to be happy to be the same as everyone else but in the end if you are different you are criticized for it by peers coworkers and religion even people you don't know will judge you if you are different and that is because they were warped into thinking it by what they are owned by religion owned money owned even how they were raised ownes them even now i am owned by this computer typing away and soon the food i will eat will own me the day to day things i do will own me forever we cant be free and we choose not to be free because it is just easier to give up are minds to what we see and hear we are all slaves in this world and we don't even know it yet.




    Submitted on 2007-12-21 12:00:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh my god i couldnt even finish this it really is the rantings of someone quite insane
    | Posted on 2007-12-21 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]

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