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    dots Submission Name: Amendots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    14/f/AK.
    Elite Ratio:    1.59 - 8/13/45
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 121
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1503



    Description:
       A favorite song of mine off my new Kid Rock CD.


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    dotsAmendots
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    It's another night in hell
    Another child won't live to tell
    Can you imagine what it's like to starve to death

    And as we sit free and well
    Another soldier has to yell
    Tell my wife and children I love them in his last breath

    C'mon now amen, amen, amen

    Habitual offenders, scumbag lawyers with agendas
    I'll tell you sometimes people I don't know what's worse
    Natural disasters or these wolves in sheep clothes pastors
    Now damn it I'm scared to send my children to church
    And how can we seek salvation when our nations race relations
    Got me feeling guilty of being white
    [ Amen lyrics found on http://www.completealbumlyrics.com ]
    But faith in human nature, our creator and our savior, I'm no saint
    But I believe in what is right

    C'mon now amen, amen
    I said amen, amen

    Stop pointing fingers and take some blame,
    Pull your future away from the flame
    Open up your mind and start to live
    Stop short changing your neighbors
    Living off hand outs and favors, and maybe
    Give a little bit more than you got to give

    Simplify, testify, identify, rectify
    And if I get high stop being so uptight
    It's only human nature and I am not a stranger
    So baby won't you stay with me tonight

    Kid Rock~"Amen"




    Submitted on 2007-12-21 22:32:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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