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    dots Submission Name: wide awakedots
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    Author: xana
    ASL Info:    17/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 34/35/24
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswide awakedots
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    Wide awake yet fast asleep
    Digging graves, I'm digging deep.
    Tiered of you and tiered of them
    Lost in drugs, don't give a damn.
    You say love but I say use
    Here to win, I'm here to chose.

    Life that's fast or life that's slow
    Who's to preach? And who's to know?
    There's no light and there's no dark
    All those stars will form an arck.
    Life and Death will be at peace
    Torn appart...I'm on my knees.

    Yeah, you're dead but so am I
    We have eyes and we are blind...
    Who's to say that we are wrong?
    Threshold passed with no return
    Time to chose is here now:
    chose your soul, or chose your life




    Submitted on 2007-12-22 11:09:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cool,Tjhe best Ive read today,reminds me of something I would write.My favorite line was Wide awake yet fast asleep,digging graves,im digging deep.
    cool,Some spelling errors,oh well,and maybe could have been broken up instead of one long stanza
    | Posted on 2007-12-23 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]


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