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    dots Submission Name: Mirror Medots
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    Author: Sir Fusting
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 5/33/25
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMirror Medots
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    I wink in the mirror,

    And he winks back,

    Who is this person?

    His tired red eyes,

    He hasn't slept in days,

    I step back,

    And he does the same,

    Finger to my nose,

    His follows in suit,

    He's irritating me,

    Mocking my movements,

    Fist in a ball I'm getting upset,

    What does he want?

    I step foward,

    He doesn't falter,

    Pull back my fist,

    Ready to strike,

    Release and he's gone,

    And he took my mirror with him.




    Submitted on 2007-12-22 13:24:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      omg i loved this interesting and a good angle really good i look forward to reading more
    | Posted on 2007-12-23 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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