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Thief


Author: Inkybro
ASL Info:    17/M/Oklahoma
Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 55 /69 /39
Words: 21
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Thief



Just because you stole it
Doesn't mean it isn't yours
And I will find a way
I will
Find a way




Submitted on 2007-12-22 17:18:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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