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    dots Submission Name: The Lonesome Valentinesdots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsThe Lonesome Valentinesdots
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    Another Valentines has gone by,
    Yet I'm still alone and don't know why.
    Men and women are together by the pounds,
    And I'm sitting alone on the ground.
    I wish I could find the one,
    Whose eyes were bright as the sun.
    Who would keep me safe from the cold,
    And would protect me in his stronghold.
    The man who would look into my eyes,
    Would have to be very wise.
    He would be supreme,
    To bad this is all a dream.
    For love does not come,
    Forever more I shall be lonesome




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