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I'm three miles lost of where i was meant to be i would have taken my compass but i decided to get lost intentionally and sleep alone under the stars next to a busy highway with no cars cause nothing makes sense anymore baby my life's become a circus act with smoke, mirrors and crystal balls and when i speak i'm spitting the words with all destain I'd tell you i love you but i'm afraid it's too late and i'll just watch my life pass me by through watery eyes that just won't cry i'm handing you the shattered pieces of my black heart take it and stab me, watch me bleed ash and dust this is what you've made of me, with your web of lies, my love was the compromise oh how it hurts..... don't look at me... You can whisper your lies but no matter how loud you say it it's still everything else but the truth so bury your heart in a glass jar and you can swear it till your dying breathe "i never planned for things to get this far" Did you think this could make things better? A little white lie could never be blacker and it's a shame for me in the end honey in the end it's me who can't let go in the end it was all just a show what part of the game did i never get? you can walk on me, take my pride and turn it into pain and leave me with nothing left except a stain in my memory i gave you everything but everything wasn't anything for you it wasn't enough my heart was in your hand waiting for you to make a move But you bluffed your hand, and bet it all on me You were meant to roll a 7 but you rolled a 3 now i'm handing you the shattered pieces of my black heart take it and stab me, watch me bleed ash and dust this is what you've made of me, with your web of lies, my love was the compromise oh how it hurts..... don't look at me... You can whisper your lies but no matter how loud you say it it's still everything else but the truth so bury your heart in a glass jar and you can swear it till your dying breathe "i never planned for things to get this far" it'll never be enough, that this is what happens when you take a lie or two, and mix it with the truth You can whisper your lies but no matter how loud you say it it's still everything else but the truth so bury your heart in a glass jar and you can swear it till your dying breathe "i never planned for things to get this far" don't look at me... i think this is how i'll die miserable and sad.. dying with all the pain inside... oh the end is nigh |
It has a lot of emotion and I like the rhythm. I almost feel the first ten-ish lines or so are too light for the rest of the composition. Also, while the last paragraph isn't my personal favorite, the last line works perfectly with the rest of the piece. | Posted on 2007-12-24 00:00:00 | by Morsketch | [ Reply to This ] | |