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Oracles of the holy palm reminds me of you; Beautiful angels of fire surround us Awakening our deepest desires;virgin blue In front of the eyes of our God Delusions in the mirrors... Us in a circle;are we to survive? Raptures of the seventh heaven; Raptures of the unspoken; Attribution of the faintest beat of our hearts Humming with the flow of tepid blood Melting us; mollifying the saturn's divination Another step to love..shall we? Never letting a moment pass by... Off we go Ninth miracle in the making;off we go In and through and through.. Elusive;what our love offers Where have you been so long? |
I like how you use words(smile) The flow of this poem was perfect! Keep up the great work! Kelley Frost | Posted on 2007-12-30 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | i love u too! haha. dint know what else to say babe! others are sure as hell blind to what u have written and i was as well until u gave me a hint! | do me a favour...never ever delete this poem...even if things get....EMBITTERED, a'ight? and about the poem? a lot of good vocab was used in this poem and that did make me feel like i was reading a superior human beings write ups but i could really relate to it... this is sth i havent said in long: KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!! | Posted on 2007-12-28 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ] | |