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    dots Submission Name: BOOBSdots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Never was well endowed ,even for a larger built girl .
    I have never been huge but wouldn’t want to be skinny .
    Tiny girls look a lil fragile to me .
    I thought of what my friends would think ,my family, my preacher.
    The decision was all together too easy in the end.
    I found myself the best surgeon.
    I placed each breast in his well tuned hands.
    I drifted into a chemical sleep sure I was going to wake up new.
    And I did
    Well I think I did I don’t remember waking up really .
    Just yesterday I squeezed into my finest leather tank .
    I pulled on my favorite jeans and got in my black muscle car.
    At a stop light I re applied my lipstick ,trailer park red.
    It came to me just then suddenly really
    I have become someone I always was but couldn’t be .
    I used to want to be different like everybody else .
    Now I am different but still myself.

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