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    dots Submission Name: My motherdots
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    Author: Jay92
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 6/17/19
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMy motherdots
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    Nothing can compare to her
    Astonishing she is and quick to for give
    Not holding a grudge but answers with a kiss
    Calm and sweet
    Yet quick to defend

    Masterpiece, the work of God's hand

    Beautiful inside and out
    Uttur brilliance, but humble she remains
    Simpathy she gives to you and I
    Helping everyone, with a caring heart





    Submitted on 2007-12-23 23:39:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Brilliant. I used to butt heads w/ my mother pretty bad. Now since Ive moved out, its so much better and Idk what Id do without her!
    | Posted on 2010-03-31 00:00:00 | by YC013 | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem.. So many mothers deserve so much more then we can give.. This is a beautiful little poem.. Good write..
    | Posted on 2007-12-24 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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