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    Author: skinnard
    ASL Info:    22 male New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 38/76/49
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 731
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    Never meant to be

    But forced to make it happen

    We were the perfect couple

    We were so disastrous

    I send you roses

    To place at my grave

    Bury deep in the soil

    For I am not your slave

    I am not your puppet

    To control as you see fit

    I am who I am

    Thats all there is to it

    This was well over

    Long before it began

    But took some time to realize

    That we never had a chance

    So give it up, let it end

    Deal with what is missing

    Give it up, I can no longer bend

    Broken from this collision




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