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    dots Submission Name: Vindicateddots
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    Author: Morsketch
    ASL Info:    21/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 27/26/26
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 836
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 797



    Description:
       Mushy poetry part two of two. Poison is bled, things cleaned up, good clean stitching applied.


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    dotsVindicateddots
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    But it was over before it started,
    And I was right all along,
    After all this time together,
    It was you who was proved wrong.

    Being right is no comfort,
    When love is on the line,
    Seeing the future isnít a blessing,
    But now, at least, I know the signs.

    You came and made me love you,
    You convinced me this was meant to be,
    But now when you look into my eyes,
    I am not the one you want to see.

    You saved me from myself,
    When I was angry and alone,
    Helped me banish all my daemons,
    And then left me on my own.

    Even though I still miss you,
    Even though I still care,
    I will survive without you,
    This is one more thing I am able to bare.




    Submitted on 2007-12-24 17:51:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the bittersweet taste this write leaves in my mouth. Perserverence, perhaps, dispite the warping of worlds that occurs after mega change- it's like a phoenix from the ashes. We all bounce back, but the question I often find myself asking (if you follow me) is whether I'm still anything near the same person I was before.

    These are the ramblings that come to mind when i read this piece.
    -Q
    | Posted on 2007-12-24 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt your struggle. It was as though you love this person and they are your life, but you need to get away from them before they take your all. You wanted no needed to be vindicated form everything, but first you need to escape them.

    Nice job.
    ~the_truth
    | Posted on 2007-12-24 00:00:00 | by the_truth | [ Reply to This ]


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