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    dots Submission Name: Im better off on my owndots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsIm better off on my owndots
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    You tell me it's for the best of me to follow your advice
    To listen to your guidlines on how to live my life
    To be aware of the difference between wrong and right
    But telling me won't do no good, try as you might
    I have already made up my mind, and its very easy to find
    I don't need your stupid guidlines, I got my own advice
    It's my life after all, I live it as i please
    Making my own decisions, learning the difference between wrong and right, and I myself will see the light
    So here's some good advice to you, since you've been a dear good friend
    Follow your own advice, on how to live your life
    because trust me, im better off on my own




    Submitted on 2007-12-25 15:22:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this because it's something anyone can relate to. I always have a problem with this because when I do something I'm always worrying about how my desicion will effect everyone else in my life and there are times when it's a good thing but at other times it's definately not worth the worry. I really enjoyed the first two lines because it went together so well and it tells the rest of the piece for itself.

    Nicely done. And it's great to be able to make your own desicions! It makes you feel grown up for once.
    | Posted on 2007-12-25 00:00:00 | by HurtDeepDown | [ Reply to This ]


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