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    dots Submission Name: I Am What I Am, and That's Thatdots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI Am What I Am, and That's Thatdots
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    I am shy and bright
    I wonder why people hate
    I hear the meoldies of my surroundings
    I see the beauty in the ugliness
    I want people to see and hear me
    I am shy and bright
    I pretend not to care about those who ignore me
    I feel saddened by what the world has become
    I touch the wings of the hovering angels
    I worry about the end of this chapter in life
    I cry over unworthy things
    I am shy and bright
    I understand very little if what is happeng around me
    I say nothing when I feel hurt
    I dream of dreaming up a perfect world
    I try to conceal what I truly feel
    I hope that someone truly sees me
    I am shy and bright




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      I really like this. I know what your saying and so does alot of other teeangers. This is deep and meaningful without having the 'emo' feel to it.
    | Posted on 2007-12-26 00:00:00 | by BigDreams | [ Reply to This ]


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