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    dots Submission Name: Guardian Angelsdots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1258
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 403



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    dotsGuardian Angelsdots
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    Hovering translucently above,
    Watching,
    Guiding,
    Helping.

    Never leaving,
    Always there,
    Always caring,
    Never lying.

    Gliding with you,
    Through all your hardships,
    Though all your memories,
    Gliding everywhere you go.

    Protecting,
    Loving,
    Smiling,
    As they hover above.




    Submitted on 2007-12-25 18:09:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow!!!! Great write that I love! That was a great one! I love angels and am a christian myself....
    That was a great poem that flowed purfectly and great ....

    Keep it up and hey check out my new write
    photographs when you got the chance...

    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-06-22 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good, pleasant, and simple. Nice piece oh and read some more of my work I always need a good critic. Oh and thanks for the comment I appreciate it.
    | Posted on 2009-05-14 00:00:00 | by Doublefeather | [ Reply to This ]
      This was good. I like the imagery but I felt it lacked emotion.
    I also felt that it was a bit too "broad" with little meaning.
    | Posted on 2007-12-25 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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