i like the lines, Lying awake where no one can hear, impatient waiting for something, strange thought out sentices like that jump out at me, you made me think beyond something like there is something out there for you some meaning some happiness, kind of like longing i guess, good write,
im not one for poems that don't rhyme. its nothing against its potency, i just never feel they flow. having said that i am very fond of the last line "tell all to the pen at hand." powerful wording directed at the perfect audience. well written.