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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots

    Author: strike three
    ASL Info:    32/m/Ethiopia
    Elite Ratio:    3.32 - 49/54/28
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Is love so hard to find I say
    Is it in favor of the flavorful?
    Does the other have a chance this day
    To embrace that delicate meaningful.
    Can the perfection move aside today
    And see what really is beautiful
    Can the actor take leave today
    And reveal the slight but truthful
    Can the magic be alive at play
    If passions agony is brimming full
    Can you find love today
    If love is not inside you fool!

    Submitted on 2007-12-26 05:50:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this, it is pretty playful with a really complicated subject. I really like how it has almost a song like sound when you read it, like a little jingle on a card or something. Keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2007-12-27 00:00:00 | by Diomedes44 | [ Reply to This ]

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