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    dots Submission Name: 'I am' forum challengedots
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    Author: BigDreams
    ASL Info:    17, female,Ontario Canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.38 - 32/27/18
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots'I am' forum challengedots
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    I am good hearted but angry
    I wonder what the future holds
    I hear Everything yet nothing
    I see the beauty in everything
    I want to be a better person
    I am good hearted but angry
    I pretend that insults don't get to me
    I feel angry with the world
    I touch the cluds when I dream
    I worry about what tomorrow may bring
    I cry about being so empty
    I am good hearted but angry
    I understand why people do what they do
    I say more then I should
    I dream an olympic dream
    I try to be accepted for who I am
    I hope that one day I will succed
    I am good hearted but angry




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