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    dots Submission Name: I need Youdots

    Author: poet09
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 157/162/122
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       juss expressin how much i need my gf and anyone who can relate or no how it feel tell me a lil bit about it

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    dotsI need Youdots

    I need you like the sky needs the sun
    you are the only one
    I need you like a newborn needs its mother
    a girl like no other

    I need you like the day needs night
    always will I treat you right
    I need you in order to live
    I will give you all I can give

    I need you more than I can ever say
    been by my side to this day
    I won't ever need another woman
    if I couldn't have you I don't want nothin'

    Submitted on 2007-12-26 13:10:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I wonder, are you still with her? Don't mean to pry that's just what I thought of after reading the description. I do feel like this, about my husband. It's kinda weird saying that but I'l be getting used to it here shortly, anyways I left him onceand I thought the whole time we were apart I would die, literally. I was the one who did the breaking up and still I cried myself to sleep every night. It's more than a heartache, it goes right down to the soul I couldn't imagine living my life without him ever again, this write reminded me of that. Thankyou, it was beautiful.

    | Posted on 2009-01-13 00:00:00 | by SDodson | [ Reply to This ]

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