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    dots Submission Name: I'll get through life...somehowdots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    20/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 10/53/57
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsI'll get through life...somehowdots
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    Sometimes i wonder if i will get through life ok
    So much confusion seems to distract me on my way
    It makes me stop to wonder if today is my last day
    As if confusion is the least of my problems, it's the people all around
    They can be so cruel and mean, is what i have found
    Judging me before getting to know me, making me be something i dont want to be
    But i have found a reason to stand my ground
    And through the reason i have found
    That i should not give up so soon on life to prove to those who judged be wrong
    That i will get through life...somehow




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