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    dots Submission Name: Cryingdots
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    Author: Poetry_Hunter
    ASL Info:    17/f/Tn
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/1/3
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 774
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    Bytes: 501



    Description:
       Rain through windows like tears through eyes.


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    dotsCryingdots
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    I watch the unkowing slip
    from their eyes as they gaze
    at the rain stricken window.
    Streaked with the doubts of all
    those before them. Washing
    away feelings that have long been
    deceased from the far corners
    of the minds of the ones
    who once watched the
    rain streak down these very same
    windows.
    Then the rain
    falls harder as the
    windows to the soul
    shatter and the rain
    pours through the cracks.




    Submitted on 2007-12-26 20:22:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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