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    dots Submission Name: Quote-clover Luckdots
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    Author: Poetry_Hunter
    ASL Info:    17/f/Tn
    Elite Ratio:    0.01 - 0/1/3
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 820
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 532



    Description:
       anger at the people in life.


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    dotsQuote-clover Luckdots
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    When angry, count to four; when very angry,swear.
    -Mark Twain

    *Anger,
    Anger,
    SILENCE
    Do you hear that...
    The void of silence!
    See...They stare at you
    Cause you
    Just yelled at them.
    1, 2, 3, 4.
    You're still there.
    I closed my eyes...
    Go Away!
    Get out...
    Oh hell just
    Go ahead...
    Just make me
    mad...that's
    what you want...
    well guess what...you
    Succeeded.




    Submitted on 2007-12-26 20:37:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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