Just a litte more
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Just a litte more
I've been meaning to tell you... I've been wanting to let you know... that you've got to cross the rivers; You've got to travel a few light years; You've got to save my soul; You've got to try a bit harder. I've been trying to show you... I've been kissing to flow love in and out of you.. But you must know it's not forever that i want. Hungry;Starving;Maddening That's how my love is; And you know you've got to try a bit harder. There's always a magic between you and I. The more i fly away the more you have to try; The more love glitters the more it bleeds you dry; Here i go again.. Hungry;insatiable;Maddening That's how my love is; Just know that you've got to push a little harder; You've got to come down way stronger, Just so we fall in love all over again.. hold on to me...just a bit longer. |
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This flowed very well. I enjoyed it and like whendt said it would make a pretty good song with the right music. Keep up the good work and normally I am not crazy about love poems because I feel it doesn't take much talent to write that kind of stuff but this is one of few exceptions where it did fairly well I liked it.| | Posted on 2008-01-01 00:00:00 | by MaxHam | [ Reply to This ] | Kind of like a song. | I liked this poem a lot! Thanks for sharing. Kelley Frost | Posted on 2007-12-30 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | great poetry...this is what e'body will say coz it is a really awesome write up of urs... for once i am outta words! | KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! | Posted on 2007-12-28 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ] | |
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