Description: Okay, this is meant as a kinda ballad/poem thingy for a friend on WICKYPOP. It's okay though--just don't go reading TOO much into it. It's just a nice poem.
A thousand eyes watch and judge--
whispers travel far;
Something's just not right, they say--
Something's not on par;
But the secret is theirs alone to guard--
a love that none can mar.
Two whisked away behind stone walls--
protected by the dark;
Wrapped up in green and silver silk--
the house from which they hark;
Inked upon their skin so plain--
that evil, shameful mark.
The third is locked in a tower--
A prison up so high;
Sealed up in crimson and gold--
nothing to do but sigh;
She waits for the day when they come--
though none know why.
But the secret is theirs alone to guard--
a love none can mar;
And though she was locked away--
their love, they could not bar;
And when the knights came to her--
they took her away and far.
From there she prospered in their care--
Content in their embrace;
Clothed in green and silver silk--
A smile upon her face;
There she found such love and happiness--
That no one could replace.
The secret is theirs alone to guard--
but you might find it, too;
If you attain such a love--
there's so much you might do;
Simply take your heart into your hands--
the rest is up to you.
im not the type to get all gushy and drool over poeples peotry but this was just that type of poem
there were no mistakes except one i do believe when you say their 4th stanza 1st line shouldnt it be theirs instead of their
but aside from that the poetry was perfect the fow smooth without no bumbs or stops in the road it could easily be the best thing ive read on this site so far
Submission Name: "Triplicity..."
