I wrote my last poem about a month ago, vowed I would never write another ever again, I still post what ive written previously, but wont write anymore new stuff.. Your poem reminds me of this, sittting there knowing that it was her last words, no more will she ever share.. I liked the depth, almost feeling like you where there with her on the cold stormy night (thats the picture i get in my head) I see her on a cliff near the ocean, just letting herself exhale one last breath