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    dots Submission Name: In its timedots
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    Author: oononotthatguy
    ASL Info:    35 M Fernley ,Nv
    Elite Ratio:    5.14 - 48/15/15
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
    Total Views: 701
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    Bytes: 853



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       This is one of my first writes. I wrote it for a
    Woman I dated for a short time.


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    A life with no new new regrets. The Taste of a sunrise, the scent of a woman. A smile that speaks Volumes. Love without risk, a true heart and a drive for something better.

    There is no love without pain.
    There is no peace without forgiveness
    There is no happyness without risk

    In its own time everything has its place. Somethings are meant to be taken away. If you are not careful the past will kill you. Take what you have and run, RUN hard, run towards that which you still have.

    When you can no longer take another step, hold on, Hold on till you can taste it.

    Dear friend I speak the truth, you are gone, I will always remember,I will always travel. I will always wonder. This I wrote for you.

    signed Joshua








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      How beautiful!! This is the epitome of a relationship that was and always will be, and you expressed that so amazingly! This was a very warming piece and it makes the reader want to read it again. Again...this was wonderful!
    | Posted on 2009-02-11 00:00:00 | by JustAnotherMe | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you. M
    | Posted on 2007-12-31 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]


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