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    dots Submission Name: ehdots

    Author: Tabris
    ASL Info:    17 male australia
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 7/6/6
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       yeah, i tried to make this rhyme

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    I open my hand
    And let go of the knife
    I cry and I weep
    This is the definition of my life

    Blood spatters on the ground
    And I slump to the floor
    What did I do?
    Why do I want more?

    I am confused
    The world rushes by
    I can't see straight
    I'm losing my mind

    I feel a presence
    Someone else is here
    I turn around
    And once more I fear

    A harsh insult
    A cruel tirade
    I wish I could endure
    I wish I could stay

    Why won't he stay silent?
    Why should he care?
    Is it the mess on the floor?
    Or the scent in the air?

    He raises his hand
    And deals a frightful blow
    As I ask myself
    How far did i go?

    Not far enough
    I am still here
    He is still hurting me
    And I still fear

    This is a crime
    This is a hypocrisy

    Why shouldn't I hurt myself?

    Submitted on 2007-12-28 06:54:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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