Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Saint Ain'tdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LameMansTerms
    ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
    Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713/1012/165
    Words: 369
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1057
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2577



    Description:
       my 4th installment of to be theWisest Wise Men without walking miles with drugs hallucinating after a fucking star looking for a baby born to a virgin chick--ooooh gotta go check that out!
    check out the others before it's too late!
    Jesus Hector Christ(the sega genesis)/Dead Shows With Hippy Jesus/Crucify The Lie


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSaint Ain'tdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I put dirt first-
    cause itís where Iíll be
    I never worship (any fucking god)
    Whose better than me?
    --
    False Idols, a miracle child
    Virgin mother, tell me another
    blasphemous story
    I can tell my children
    So they like me become more willing
    To pay, or make generous donations
    cause judgement days almost upon us
    (oooh,ooooh)
    don't be the one who always stiffed us
    cause that would put you on top of Satan's VDP (very dumb person)List
    --
    a sinful getaway or a retreat
    it's an excuse for priests to do as they please
    without a brain or an empty seat
    they twist and fuck with your brain
    till you want to believe in anything
    normal or reasonably sane
    --
    The stupefied the dumb
    disoriented brothers
    from miles around
    the sharpest shooters and some lost others
    walking aimlessly around
    --
    The illusion, the joke
    The confusion, now youíre broke
    Looking for answers
    Where there are none
    Searching for meaning,
    a sign from no-one
    At least no-one real
    that you can feel
    or has been seen since the wheel
    --
    One God,
    Only One
    whereabouts unknown
    but you know him as the forgiving
    yet
    vengeful one
    your absolute blind trust is acquired
    too much logic is set on fire
    dont ask where you're going-
    we'll tell ya where you came from-
    Believing is demeaning
    it's sad for the Vulnerable Ones
    --
    Saint Aint
    ain't the one
    no, not the savior
    but doesn't need favors
    fuck who you want
    you can even fuck her virgin son
    and do it in church
    even if you never go
    synagogue, temple
    or whatever works
    and ask your priest reverend or rabbi
    for some truth...
    then listen to questions to your questions chock full of lies
    --
    it's a scam
    god damn
    I am
    too smart
    to be a part of
    the biggest lie ever
    because I know better...
    it's really simple..
    it was never for me
    or Saint Aint or anybody else to ever decide
    why I live...or how I lived my fucking life

    This is the Gospel according to someone who really did exist.....
    thanks be to god......



    Saint LameMansTerms




    Submitted on 2007-12-28 08:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    155026

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry