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    dots Submission Name: day to nightdots
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    Author: koolness
    ASL Info:    17/female/city of evil
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 80/106/56
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsday to nightdots
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    The sun high in the skywith happy rays,
    there till late afternoon it stays.
    Dusk starts creeping in slowly,
    then the celestial body sinks woely.
    Night fall, the moon smiles upon the earth,
    and again, the sun rise, not knowing of its worth.
    Day in and day out routine the same,
    the moon's happy smiles and the sun's burning flames.




    Submitted on 2007-12-28 16:08:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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