Hate by Savannah Cullen

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Author:	Savannah Cullen
Elite Ratio:	1.66 - 9/37/48
Words:	52

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	1134
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	312

Description:
A companion to "Love" opposite in almost evey way, hope you enjoy.

Hate

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Hate is like a river
Beautiful, yet deady
A trickle of a stream
Or the roaring of a river
Still made by the same thing
Anger
The douser of love
With hate love goes out in an instant
Hate is the key to inhumanity
For without hate, all we are is love.

Submitted on 2007-12-28 22:38:00 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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It means a lot to them, as it does to you.