But I thought your current situation was you were shortly off to England to visit the BF? No? Or you would like to freeze that so you could stay? BTW, will you be offline the whole time? Nice minimalist work.
I liked this a lot. I thought the last two lines ended it well and the overall idea was superb. I don't really have any suggestions for editing because I think the poem is great the way it is. Keep up the good work!
A merry little laugh then. Too much criticism for such a cute image. Rather than put it down, hold it at different distances and you'd be suitably amused at the different and strange transformation meeting your view. Oh no, I'm back to the halucinogens again. I liked this, if you did, forget any negative comments.
hehehe...first i love your pic. second your poem is very good. Using the idea of the mirror, in particular the type of mirror truely captures your feelings and we as the reader understand what you are going thru. In a few lines, I am left to think "If only"