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Submission Name:
Ecstasy
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Author:
Sir Fusting
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Ecstasy
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Floating in clouds of expression.
I'm your shoulder,
If you'll be mine.
A smile fades
into a smile
into a fading
smile.
Submitted on 2007-12-29 18:12:06
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