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    dots Submission Name: Stephaniedots
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    Author: ParanoidParadox
    ASL Info:    20/m/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 85/76/32
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 205
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 997



    Description:
       One of my happier writes in a while. pretty straight forward to.


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    dotsStephaniedots
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    She’s eighteen and full of dreams
    Got a fire in her heart
    No lies when you look in her eyes
    Finishes what she starts

    Many things I see in her
    The beauty of the world
    I never want to see her cry
    That pretty thing unfurled

    Don’t change who you are, baby
    This hell needs more people like you

    One shining light; glimmer of hope
    In a place that’s so dark.
    An unmasked face I know is true
    In this too-foolish farce

    Pressure coming in from all sides
    They think they know what’s best
    I hope she will not falter here
    As she’s put to the test

    Don’t change who you are, darling
    They need more people like you

    She isn’t like the other girls
    Caught up in fantasy
    A bright future ahead of her
    In everything she sees

    Don’t change who you are, beauty
    I need someone like you




    Submitted on 2007-12-30 01:18:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww hunny....im actually crying right now....omg your so adorable.*kisses*
    love
    Steph
    | Posted on 2008-01-01 00:00:00 | by sugar_sweet | [ Reply to This ]
      ..you know it's funny. I know someone with the same persona :) . Sadly, she is a special child. A leaver in my school but she was pleasant, funny and adorable. I used to call her 'sunshine'. Someone with the same name but all of 19. Your peom reminds me of her :(
    | Posted on 2007-12-30 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]



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