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    dots Submission Name: Bullet Love Engravedots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 176
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBullet Love Engravedots
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    Fate is such a game, teasing and taunting
    It rolled me dices
    Each number only to add to my pain

    Cards dealt to my hand, I am a poor player
    Losing everything to things I cannot control
    Nothing to lose, nothing to gain

    Bet my life on gambles and risk
    All I have left if but a bullet
    I'd let u have it, if u would take it

    Six slots, One load, and a spin of the chamber
    I have nothing, just pull the trigger
    Blindfold me and let me sleep

    I hear a click, and a shot
    I feel nothing, but a dream
    Life is now a dream...

    I awake to see you
    A whisper to my soul
    "Bullet Love Engrave"

    A new life,
    A new beginning
    A new love

    Heaven & Hell are outraged
    Fate & Destiny baffled
    Time & Death confused

    I played my hand, meant to end
    But your hand relived mine
    Love, simply love...

    -= Love saved me, I love you =-




    Submitted on 2007-12-30 07:01:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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