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    dots Submission Name: Too Latedots
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    Author: Savannah Cullen
    ASL Info:    17 Female Florida
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 9/33/45
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 197
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    Description:
       Another poem inspired by Twilight. I have a few more in this series, but then I'll be posting some of my other works.


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    dotsToo Latedots
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    I raced against the clock
    For a life other that my own
    The end growing nearer with each tick or tock
    The thought of after
    Chilling to the bone
    I hoped and prayed for the best
    yet as I ran inside
    I nearly found the worst
    There my angel lay
    Battered and broken
    Writhing in pain without rest
    Decisions, what must they be
    She screamed yet again
    I thought quickly
    My angel was in agony
    One glance and I made my resolve
    Soon after her look of pain dissolved
    I shuddered at the thought
    How close I had been to being
    Too late




    Submitted on 2007-12-30 19:33:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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