Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Too Latedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Savannah Cullen
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 9/37/48
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 777
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 650



    Description:
       Another poem inspired by Twilight. I have a few more in this series, but then I'll be posting some of my other works.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsToo Latedots
    -------------------------------------------


    I raced against the clock
    For a life other that my own
    The end growing nearer with each tick or tock
    The thought of after
    Chilling to the bone
    I hoped and prayed for the best
    yet as I ran inside
    I nearly found the worst
    There my angel lay
    Battered and broken
    Writhing in pain without rest
    Decisions, what must they be
    She screamed yet again
    I thought quickly
    My angel was in agony
    One glance and I made my resolve
    Soon after her look of pain dissolved
    I shuddered at the thought
    How close I had been to being
    Too late




    Submitted on 2007-12-30 19:33:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    155139

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry