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    dots Submission Name: North Star Over Koreadots
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    Author: Lilithe_Aislin
    ASL Info:    20/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    5.19 - 79/67/15
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 675



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       This is just one big metaphor, because I love them so much. It is rather personal to me, maybe one man would be able to tell, the secret is in the title. ;)


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    dotsNorth Star Over Koreadots
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    If I were to chance upon a burning star
    With more heat than the blood in my veins
    Shimmering, shaking in the frozen sky
    Light years of void space between us
    Would it, perhaps, chance upon me?

    Nothing keeps my gaze as a night sky
    As this diamond among zircon
    In a sea of shivering lights
    One my gaze may never just overlook
    Because it stares intently back

    Long I have journeyed this cold Earth
    With nothing but stones and ice to accompany
    Yet when my star casts it's rays
    Breaking free of shy glittering reserve, it shines
    I cannot help but feel the warmth




    Submitted on 2007-12-30 21:58:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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