yummmy.... oo, how sensual.. nice comparison of the chocolate and the way someone can make you feel all ooey and gooey and soft and... well, yeah... i love the image of licking you from the paper. .. very delicious indeed!
Hehe, I watched the youtube video. Honestly, I feel like the "do do do"s in the background sort of took away from the sensuality you were trying to convey with your words. It could have done without the "dos". Hehe, as for the poem itself, it seems like something that should have been one of the sections of your book, which is contently placed in my library. I am a huge fan of your work, Chrys, believe it. This was really well written. The youtube video, maybe I missed what you were trying to do with it, so I'll go watch it again, but I truly did feel that the "dos" took away from it.
Happy New Year and Be Well,