Description: Dunno really, i just wrote it yesterday while i was talking to this guy. He put me on hold for a while, and i just babbled this out. It's just cause he does these things i'm not used to doing at all. And somehow, I want to do them.
A desire to listen to your strange stories
And hear about how much you hate my sister
They may be things I don't like
But I have a strong desire for them
A desire to talk about cars
That I have never even shown interest to.
And to talk about the cartoons you watch
When I don't watch them myself
A desire to scare myself to death
As I ride a motorcycle with you
And to eat something that I hate
Just because you like it
A strange desire to do many things
Comes across me
As I am with you.
OK, what I meant was that the first idea, the idea of wanting to wake up every day with this fellow, isn't a strange idea, but perfectly normal, if you care for him. The rest of the ideas are not only strange (or foriegn if you prefer that term) but are also self sacrificing. You are talking about wanting to do things you normaly have no interest in, because you like this person. After time you will grow tired of this. That's all. If you have to do things you really don't care for, to win someone's attention, it's not a healthy give and take relationship. Clearer? Don't worry about rhyme. If you have a poem to write that rhymes swell. If you have one like this that is free verse, swell. And the strange/foriegn thing is personal taste.
These aren't strange though, are they. I think they are more 'foriegn ideas' because they aren't your ordinary ideas. Actually the first few lines aren't strange or foriegn, you wish to wake up every day with your BF. That is only normal. But then you speak of subjugating your desires to win his affection, blessing, admiration. I hope you understand this will fail, that after time you will begrudge him the things you gave up for him and question why he wouldn't give up some of himself for the things which are important for you. Will he let you read him your poems, or your favorite ones by other authors? There's your answer. But your writing here is fine. have a good weekend, Dave
so u like a guy so much that u want experience all the things he likes... makes sense when in luv or in some strange stuff... wat the hell it was well written bye
Submission Name: Strange desire
