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    dots Submission Name: Someonedots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    I long to share my soul with someone
    I long to share my mornings and nights
    I wish to share my sunrises
    I wish to share my sunsets
    I beg for someone to share my pain
    I beg for someone to share my love
    For every morning I long, wish and beg for someone to hold me tight and kiss my lips
    For every night I beg, wish and long for that special someone who will keep my heart and my soul along side his own.
    But no matter how much I beg, I have no one to share anything.
    No matter how much I wish upon that falling star, there is no one to kiss me.
    And no Matter how much I long for that special touch, it cease to exist.




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