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    dots Submission Name: I heart you, ever so dearlydots

    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 427
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       I was listening to a friends band over myspace. The melody, the words, this is what it created within my mind.
    Tonight I lay awake, restless with thoughts in my mind about the one that calls me his girl. Truth be told, this is for him.
    My promise ring.

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    dotsI heart you, ever so dearlydots

    Restless from all of the complications
    Looking down at my cellphone
    Laying next to my hand
    Desprately, waiting on you
    The rush my heart endures
    As our song plays
    Shattering the silence
    That ever so scares me
    Wanting to hear your voice
    To sooth my worried mind
    Wide awake
    Holding myself tonight
    Back against the wall
    Knees close to my chest
    As I bury my head into my arms
    These are real tears tonight
    That run down my face
    What can I say?
    I need you tonight
    Need you right now
    I can tell something is wrong
    Something, wrong with us
    Closing my eyes
    Retreating back to those days
    Where this thing called life
    Seemed so simple
    Slinding my back up against the wall
    Standing up
    Turning to the mirror
    I dont reconize myself
    The person staring back
    She changed
    On the inside
    I can see her pain
    Writting all over her face
    This all doesn't feel right
    My past haunts me at night
    As I live the present in the day
    Future still unknown to most
    I dream it when I'm with you
    And when we're apart
    The future seems so distant
    Out of reach
    My grasp isn't strong enough
    Hoping when I do rest my head
    When I wake you'll be by my side
    Holding my hand tight
    Like the first time
    Kiss me like it was our last
    You don't realize how much this means to me
    How much you mean to me
    This is real
    We aren't just some poster couple
    Separting the lies from the truth
    Where trust stays as the key
    Between you and me
    This isn't so new
    But long forgotten
    These feelings of loneliness
    And broken hearts
    Start to heal
    Those simple words
    Hold so much meaning
    I can feel these lips
    Quivering them
    I remain speechless
    Scared to hear that dreadful pause
    To hear words that aren't the same
    I wish to hear them spoken
    Directed to me
    But this is all to early
    So a substitute
    Is uttered softly into your ear
    My hands entangled with yours
    Lips so close
    Eyes that meet
    I know you can't say them now
    But I know I can say
    I heart you, ever so dearly
    You mean the world to me

    And this is my promise
    Ever to stay true
    These words, I heart you
    Hold more meaning
    As a promise ring
    Holds a place for the real ring
    So I promise you this
    I heart you, ever so dearly.

    Submitted on 2008-01-02 03:32:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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