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    dots Submission Name: Rockingdots
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    Author: N0shin
    Elite Ratio:    1.3 - 42/26/15
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       That's how i feel about life...do things that u always wanted to do..Don't fear..one needs to feel,taste,touch life.


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    dotsRockingdots
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    Sad how you breathe;
    Sad how you smile;
    I sense your perfect circle.
    So close your eyes when you walk
    Doesn’t matter if you cry or talk
    Honey you must know;
    We’ll live once
    And life must be rocking.

    Count the seconds
    Count the crystals
    I call for a dance with you
    I need to do the moves
    to and fro;
    Hip to hip;
    Tonight

    Put on that luscious smile
    Don’t sing, don’t grieve
    Time to get bolder;
    Time to swing faster;
    Look beyond innocence
    Walls tremor;
    Breaking;
    Tongues talk;
    Crushing
    Can’t stop
    For life’s got to be rocking.

    Insane
    How I savor life.
    Mild
    The way you love.
    We need to get going
    We need to keep moving
    We’ve got to break your soul;
    To fly.

    When all is shattered and broken;
    When all your tears dry;
    You need to find me;
    You need to keep on searching;
    You’ve got to learn;
    That;
    Life must be rocking.




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      "When all is shattered and broken;
    When all your tears dry;
    You need to find me;"

    -today I did find yeh, sweetheart! when my tears had dried and everything around me was truly shattered and broken.
    eveytime i read this poem of urs i feel alive and my sorrows and grief seem to wither away... and most of all i feel like i cud smile for you!

    u are a true genius at work with ur poetry... keep 'em coming...and "KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK"!

    -tc
    -luv yeh

    -obaid
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]



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