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I see you sit twisting your fingers into knots and watch the way your head angles downward preventing your eyes from meeting mine I don't really care what sin you are confessing it is enough just to have you here I have watched you grow from infant, to child and then receded from you no longer trusted no longer needed as child gave way to man Now, you come, lost, in a time of trouble, returning to my door afraid not sure of your reception In time I know all troubles will find their endings I know this life on earth is filled with wrongs and other ill turnings I also know amid the sadness and grief and regrettings moments of such purity shine and lift a heart to see eternity laying your burden of shame, at my feet and asking for my opinion on what course you should choose has reawakened all my love lighting the darkened rooms inside my soul that i feel more alive my pride in you is of such a fierce devotion that words fail me you look to me and see that softly tears assemble to cleanse us both as I hold you in my arms. |
K, this is beautifully written. I feel the soul-deep love spilling out in every line. The wording is so eloquently done it makes me want to cry a little. Rock on and I hope to see more writes soon. amid the sadness and grief and regrettings, moments of such purity shine and lift the heart to eternity are my favorite lines, thoug personally I would have killed the word but at the beginning of the first line I have posted here. | Posted on 2008-01-13 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ] | |