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    dots Submission Name: Ponderin'dots
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    Author: Roberto Santos
    ASL Info:    18/Male/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 118/159/75
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 653
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    Bytes: 611



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       A sonnet which speaks for itself, really


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    dotsPonderin'dots
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    As I lie here beside the waters
    The ripples invoke your countenance
    At this moment, nothing really matters
    As I stay content in remembrance.
    Later in life I値l sit and ponder
    Over times long passed me by
    And I might then sit and wonder
    Recalling your memories with a sigh.

    Even if I never see you again
    I know that痴 the most likely prospect
    I値l stir up the memories of you which remain
    And I値l invoke your countless aspects.
    Even though you値l be well out of sight
    I値l not forget you, try as I might.




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    ||| Comments |||
      A finely and deftly done sonnet here....this form is to seldom attempt by anyone now a days....more, let us see more sonnets!! bravo... bravo... bravo...
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hm... This is good overall. A bit lackluster but it's ok. Keep writing!
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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