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    dots Submission Name: 01010011.01101100.01100001.01110110.01100101.dots
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    Author: SanctityExposed
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.98 - 48/66/40
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 1326
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 954



    Description:
       The title to this poem is "Slave" in Binary coding. The dots represent the spaces between letters. As is, the title justifies this poem. Enjoy, bishes.


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    dots01010011.01101100.01100001.01110110.01100101.dots
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    What's my name?
    I'm trapped in a series of numbers.
    I'm held hostage in a series of tubes.
    My lover is http://

    Emotions are expressed with
    Capital O Capital M Capital G
    Exclamation.
    Oh my God.

    Multimedia, give me something
    Worth watching today.
    Hand on vermin Mouse,
    I give orgasm to .org.com.gov

    Clicking, scrolling, dragging.
    Brutal dance between Binary codes.
    "You're the 1 Millionth visitor!"
    Lucky me, Spam for dinner.

    I'll never yell at you
    Dear ISP.
    Though you fault me
    And sometimes leave Home.

    I want the answers to life.
    Google: HHGTTG =
    42.
    Ask.com, do you know why my heart breaks?

    Here I will sit
    Day in, Day out.
    17 degrees Fahrenheit.
    Wonder what Indians do for fun.




    Submitted on 2008-01-02 14:57:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Great job writing this, yeah i think that way too, people are too involved in this thing called PC and everything has to deal with it, i guess maybe one day i will go out of this city and and get touch with nature, that is one thing i have been wanting to do 5 o 6 or more years ago,
    I hope this year i will tell the girl i love that we are on vacacion even for 1 day , and i ll be with her far for this pc that makes me smoke (i work as a programmer, i love my job, but too much of anything makes you hate that thing, i hope you get me)
    so keep writing, take care!
    Victor
    | Posted on 2008-02-25 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      I think you put it all down in words that we live each and every day, darling.

    Too bad we're so addicted we can't leave, right?

    I honestly can't think of anything to say other than absolutely perfection!
    | Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by DemonicInk | [ Reply to This ]
      HA! I loved this! Man, I didn't realize that I felt this way myself until I read this piece- or rather, I never would have thought of expressing it like this. It kind of makes me feel both simultaneously triumphant and a little down on myself (haha) that I totally got every line you wrote. I'm glad you wrote this piece, having read the other piece a few posts up from this one, and not feeling like taking the time (I liked that one too) to fully analyze and comment on it. (Too much to say)
    I thought that the line "I give orgasm to .org.com.gov" was by a large distance my favorite line I've read all night. I'm gonna fave this if you don't mind.
    -Q
    | Posted on 2008-01-04 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]
      Eh,

    very cool poem SE. The rhythm, the language, all give the perfect feeling of being trapped inside the little desktop boxes we give so much time too, all the while feeling just annoyed enough not to stop. One more click, one more site, one more waaaaay too long night following random winding paths through javahtmlflash coded manifestos of capitalism and "free expression."

    We love it, we hate it. TV redux, on amphetamines and steroids and HGH.

    Of course we love it. It led us to ES, right? Ha.

    "Multimedia, give me something
    Worth watching today.
    Hand on vermin Mouse,
    I give orgasm to .org.com.gov"

    Great stanza, so uniquely crafted in simple format but conveying quite a bit.

    Nice piece SE, keep it up.

    Yours, eh,

    James
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]
      All I can say is Wow. Really. And I loved it. But WOW.
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]


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