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Author:	Flynn
ASL Info:	19/M/MI
Elite Ratio:	3.89 - 74/114/46
Words:	415

Class/Type:	Lyrics/Angry
Total Views:	333
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	2443

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My darker side, heh.

This is the bit of me I keep to myself. Sometimes though, it shows, and it scares me.

Enjoy my angst!

And the... swearing.

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I must have seen
A thousand dreams
Fallen straight to the floor.

I must have known
A fuse was blown
She screamed a lot thus far.

I must have dreamed
Have yelled have screamed
Things I yell, but I mustn’t yell

FUCKING SCREAM IT!

I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah!
I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah AH!

It was the way you said your things
Your sweet defiant lies.
The way you move your body
In our late nocturnal ties.
Moving every inch around us both
To feel the pulse warmed flesh
To feel the sex in side of you was just another vex.

And when I feel myself arriving, I feel no fucking shame.
It isn’t you my poor false love, but my thoughts which are to blame
I’m quivering I’m shivering, Going deeper in our game.
I don’t care if you’re screaming, I don’t care if you like the ride.
I only give a damn about the wetness that’s inside.
So I try to stay on top of you, to see you start to cry.
And the thought that made me come into, was making you fucking (SCREAM IT) die!

I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah!
I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah AH!

Don’t care to bring a bandage.
Don’t care about your hurt.
Don’t care about the dirt in yours
Just what lies your skirt.
Don’t wanna make love to you, Don’t wanna hear you sigh.
Don’t wanna make you happy, Don’t care if you cry.
I just came here for one reason, so simple it’s serene
To satisfy this lusty hate, a dream within my dream.
So stuff it in a pillow, toss them out the door.
I just wanna fuck you, you stupid goddamn whore
You’re just a whore.

I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah!
I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah AH!

I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah!
I hate you! I hate you! I fucking hate you!
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah AH!

SCREAM IT.
FUCKIN SCREAM
Yeah Yeah.

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  I love this piece...it reminds me of so much I've written in the past.

I LOVE hearing someone's anger revealed in a constructive manner, via writing...

As for what my dear Sanctity said...I AGREE! Turn on MAJORLY!

*grin*

Now that you know more about me than you wanted to, I want to hear you sing this at some point in time please.
| Posted on 2008-01-11 00:00:00 | by DemonicInk | [ Reply to This ]
  Hehe. I love angry songs. And this one just hit the spot. I loved it, even the vulgar-ness. It was intense, and I found it to be stoic in a way. You are an amazing writer. Guess I'll just have to keep on readin!
| Posted on 2008-01-07 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
  Hmm...This makes me want to listen to She Fuc*in' Hates Me, by Puddle of Mud. Haha.

Well, I wanted to read an angsty poem, and I have to say I'm happier to have come across angry lyrics. This was really well done.
Though if it were just a poem, I would hope to see more for a course - but I'm sure it works all the same.

As for the anger toward the person you're humping, haha that's either some great angry sex or one scary fricken hour. lol. Either way though, I guess that's what you wanted out of this, so all I can do is say well done for scaring the crap out of me. Hahaha.
| Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by stefhy | [ Reply to This ]
  oh u meen pussy right?

| Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
  dude this is great I enjoyed readen bjut what u meen here wetness that’s inside.????????????????????????sorry dont get maybe I'll reread. but good job.
| Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by DrewDilla | [ Reply to This ]
  Uh, Mr. Flynn...

I almost feel abashed saying this...but God, turn on MAJOR!

Okay, that lil' bit revealed.

I love, love, loooove it.

I can definitely hear this, and hear it well I do.

Great piece, made my heart race. Hehe.
| Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by SanctityExposed | [ Reply to This ]

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